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Perfect, P.P.- Past Perfect, F.P.- Future Perfect, Pr. P.C.- Present Perfect Continuous, P.P.C.- Past Perfect Continuous, F.P.C.- Future Perfect Continuous, F.S.P.- Future Simple in the Past, F.C.P.- Future Continuous in the Past, F.P.P.-Future Perfect in the Past, F.P.C.P.- Future Perfect Continuous in the Past.

2) I (to wait- Pr.P.C.) for permission to go abroad for three months, but I (not to receive- Pr.P.) the visa yet.
3) We (to drink-P.C.) tea when the telephone (to ring).
4) Light ( to travel- Pr.S.) more quickly than sound.
5) I (to finish- F.P.) the book by Friday. If you like, I (to give-F.S.) it to you on Saturday.
6) He said he (to arrive –F.S. in the Past) in the evening.
7) We already (to cover-P.P.) about ten miles when Peter, who (to look-P.P.C.) out of the window for the last five or ten minutes, exclaimed, “Here is the station.”
8) The young and the old (to suffer- F.C.) from the economic recession. (экономический спад)
9) Housewives and their children (to watch- F.P.C.) this show for three years by next autumn.
10) We thought we (to lie- F.P.C.in the Past) on the beach for half a day when our friends returned from dive.
Мы думали, что будем лежать на пляже полдня, когда наши друзья вернутся после погружения.
11) Researchers conveyed that the Earth (not to survive-F.P.in the Past) after the sun went out.
12) It was reported that Plex Company (to share- F.C.in the Past) information and its plans with subscribers in the coming months.

In this life everyone is needed to have a friend. This necessity is born when we become aware of some parts of the world's life. When we are small and nobody want to play with us, we feel a loneliness, so we start crying or tugging at somebody. These is a first of the necessities of people’s life.
Secondly, after we have a new contact of someone, we feel an appetency and want become the best friend of this person. Since this moment, we think about the true friendship. In our head the brains start to do an analysis about the qualities of the best friendship. The honesty, sincerity, self-devotion, generousity are our wishes, that we want to give-and-take.
Thirdly, the true friendship makes us more careful and cautious towards others. The care, attention and love of close people are giving for us more happiness and the communication becomes more mutual and closely between people
In addition, we shall be interesting for all. The good sense of humour not only make a laugh us , but it is a way of deciding our problems from difficult situations. The faith in acquaintance is important in friendship, because without this we can lose the most valuable thing for us.
Don't lose something which you have!

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One winter evening very strong wind blew. Miller stayed at home, and slept in a chair. From a wind the window at which there was a lamp opened. The lamp fell to a floor and lit up. The fire began. Miller's all family ran out from the house, having taken with itself only a little food. The fire ended.
- Repair is necessary to our house. Where we will live now?
- We can live at Hans. After all he is our friend. It will shelter us.
Miller's family came into Hans's house. Meanwhile Small Hans tried to be warmed at the furnace.
- We have a trouble! - compassionately Miller told. - The friend, you not against, what I and my family we will live at you?
- Certainly! I am glad you to see! Live how many you will wish!

Next day Miller early woke Hans.- Hans, give a breakfast.
Hans brought a few nuts.
- It everything? Bring something else.
- Forgive, Miller, but I have no food any more...

All winter Miller and Hans lived in poverty. Miller understood how it was heavy to live to Hans.
In the spring Miller built the house anew. It was helped by Hans. Now Miller really appreciated the friend and shared with all of them a crop as Hans once shared.

дома. Я мог спать до полудня и ничего не делать. Я не катался на коньках и санях и не играл в снежки. Я находился дома, читал книги и играл в компьютерные игры. Иногда вечером мы выходили с сестрой гулять по тихому ночному городу. Это были лучшие новогодние каникулы.