Я написала мнение о субкультуры и о том к какой группе людей я отношусь. Проверьте пожалуйста, там могут быть ошибки в построении и во времени!

1. You may be sure she won't let you down (to rely on).
2. At the thought of it I felt sad (to cause).
3. It is very pleasant when everybody likes you (to have).
4. He shall return. They will take care of it (to get).
5. It seemed to me that he knew more than he had said (to suspect).
6. Smth hard struck my leg (to feel).
7. He was taken in without being aware of it (to allow).
8. I hope that some steps will be taken in this direction (to expect).
9. His knowledge of English improved thanks to the work with the computer programmes (to enable).

тексте. Я написала сочинение, но я плохо знаю английский, поэтому в моём
тексте могут быть ошибки, помогите пожалуйста проверить это!!! Заранее
спасибо!!
текст:
My best and memorable day in my life is
considered the new year! On the eve of my always covers the strange
feeling that something needs to happen and joyful magical. Throughout
the festive atmosphere , all selected beautiful Christmas tree, buy
different fruits , sweets, prepare gifts for loved ones.

We begin
preparing for the holiday in advance. Clean the house , decorate the
Christmas tree ,Decorate the room with balls, garlands, beautiful toys.
Mom always cooks for the holiday table something unusual and very tasty.
I try not to sleep time of arrival of the new year under the chiming
clock . After the final blow on the street fireworks begins, which can
last for an hour! We usually have fun, hold various contests , dance,
sing . It's really fun!

Especially good when New Year's Eve worth
frosty snowy weather. In windows of all the houses flashing colored
lights . Celebrating and having fun .Apparently, due to the fact that
the New Year a general holiday , celebrate it so fun!

те пожалуйста проверить это!!! Заранее спасибо!!
текст:
My best and memorable day in my life is considered the new year! On the eve of my always covers the strange feeling that something needs to happen and joyful magical. Throughout the festive atmosphere , all selected beautiful Christmas tree, buy different fruits , sweets, prepare gifts for loved ones.

We begin preparing for the holiday in advance. Clean the house , decorate the Christmas tree ,Decorate the room with balls, garlands, beautiful toys. Mom always cooks for the holiday table something unusual and very tasty. I try not to sleep time of arrival of the new year under the chiming clock . After the final blow on the street fireworks begins, which can last for an hour! We usually have fun, hold various contests , dance, sing . It's really fun!

Especially good when New Year's Eve worth frosty snowy weather. In windows of all the houses flashing colored lights . Celebrating and having fun .Apparently, due to the fact that the New Year a general holiday , celebrate it so fun!

на тему на приеме у врача!

ну например у одного врача терапевта или окулиста только не у зубного.

ну над написать - прием у врача начинается с чего начинается , что делает пациент ну берет там карточку талон все такое надо написать до конца до до свидания!

буду очеень благодарнаа