Помогите пожалуйста исправить ошибки в английском тексте. Я написала сочинение, но я плохо знаю английский, поэтому в моём тексте могут быть ошибки, помоги

(to skate) very well.

2.You (to skate) last Sunday?-Yes, we (to skate) the whole day last Sunday.We (to skate) again next Sunday.

3.My brother can skate very well.He (to skate) every Sunday.

4.What you (to do) now?-I (to wash) the dishes.

5.What you (to do) at three o'clock yestarday?-I (to have) dinner.

6.You (to have) dinner now?

7.Where your brother (to work)?-He (to work) at an institute.

8.Your grandmother (to sleep) when you (to come) home yestarday?

9.What your brother (to do) tomorrow?

10.I (not to go) to the shop yestarday.I (to go) to the shop tomorrow.

11.Where Kate (to go) whhen you (to meet) her yestarday?

12.Every day the boss (to enter) the office at nine o'clock.

написано в 3 лице и в present simple

So Much More than Just the News
For eight years hundreds of students (1) (to read) The Newspaper. It (2) (to deliver) to classrooms in many over the
Besides it (3) (to bring) news to schools in many coun-
of Europe and North America. Schools who (4)
r-bscribe) receive a class set of 32 copies each half term.
Each issue (5) (to include) a colourful and lively mix of news items and
i written for 8 to 14 year olds supporting key areas of the curriculum.
The Newspaper not only (6) (to provide) an interesting
ir;ety of non-fiction reading material it also (7)
encourage) discussion by covering those issues that (8) be) important to our readers. The Newspaper (9)
publish) six times a year (once each half term). It is available by subscrip- ■Qon, too.

-Скоро!!!

I want to tell you about his new dome.On very cozy and it krasivyy.Sostoit of three floors. On the ground floor is a large living me , where have all you need to relax , there are no less cozy kitchen where you can cook your favorite dishes , there is also a bathroom and the second floor is koridor.Na my room, and my parents room guests. My room is very cozy. I can rest in it , do homework or just sleep . On the floor we tetem loft, which we converted into a room for entertaining. There we have fun . Play various games, read books and magazines.
In the yard of my house has a garden that loves my mom . In the summer we often spend time together it for flowers.
I love my new home.
Amy and how you feel about plants ? You love to tinker in the garden? Do you have organizations ozelineniyu city ?
Я хочу рассказать тебе о своем новом доме.Он очень уютный и красивый.Состоит он из трех этажей. На первом этаже у меня находиться большая гостинная,где есть все что нужно для отдыха,есть не менее уютная кухня,где можно готовить любимые блюда,так же есть ванная комната и коридор.На втором этаже находится моя комната,комната моих родителей и комната для гостей. В моей комнате очень уютно. Я могу в ней отдохнуть,сделать уроки или просто поспать. На тетьем этаже у нас чердак,который мы переделали под комнату для развлечений. Там мы весело проводим время. Играем в различные игры, читаем книги и журналы.
Во дворе моего дома есть сад, который очень любит моя мама. Летом мы часто с ней проводим вместе время за цветами.
Я очень люблю свой новый дом.
Эми а как ты относишься к растениям? Ты любишь возиться в саду? У вас есть организации по озеленению города?

Исправьте ошибки))) а то текст не получается))))
bat habits. Its very large and important problem of modern society. Everyone has the bad habit in the world. bat habits are diffrent. It s not only smoking. alcohol and drugs. It s also beting nails.lins.picking your nose.talking with your mouth full and other. I also have bad habits . i keep the back upright....click. a pen and leave everything the last day.

to go in for sport. now i attending one of the sports club.we a go there together with my friend twice a week. not long ago we take part in the compition among different coleges. next year we shall go to moscow to visit moscow sports clubs

заранее большое спасибо!!!!!!!!! Задание по английскому языку: возьмите красную ручку и исправьте ошибки.
1. Who shall help me tomorrow?
2. Who have English on Thursday?
3. Who were at the stadium last Monday?
4. In Russia Sunday is seventh day of the week?
5. Who are hungry? —. We are.
6. Who go to school in the evening?
7. It sometimes snow in October.
8. This hamster is funniest animal in the pet shop.
9. Where are you usually go on Thursday?
10. Is she usually meet her friends there?