Тут нужно исправить ошибки кроме подчеркнутых слов помогите пожалуйста

1)Ваш колледж организует практику?
2)Экзамены у вас сдаются летом?
3)Книги читаются вашими студентами для подготовки занятий?

Более популярным праздником в Великобритании является Рождество.

1)The boys play hockey VERY WELL
2)The girls are dancing MODERN DANCES
3)We visited our relatives LAST YEAR
4)The pupils have just translated THE ARTICLE
5)We went TO THE THEATRE a week ago
6)My classmates got excellent MARKS
7)A NEW MUSEUM was opened a year ago

тексте. Я написала сочинение, но я плохо знаю английский, поэтому в моём
тексте могут быть ошибки, помогите пожалуйста проверить это!!! Заранее
спасибо!!
текст:
My best and memorable day in my life is
considered the new year! On the eve of my always covers the strange
feeling that something needs to happen and joyful magical. Throughout
the festive atmosphere , all selected beautiful Christmas tree, buy
different fruits , sweets, prepare gifts for loved ones.

We begin
preparing for the holiday in advance. Clean the house , decorate the
Christmas tree ,Decorate the room with balls, garlands, beautiful toys.
Mom always cooks for the holiday table something unusual and very tasty.
I try not to sleep time of arrival of the new year under the chiming
clock . After the final blow on the street fireworks begins, which can
last for an hour! We usually have fun, hold various contests , dance,
sing . It's really fun!

Especially good when New Year's Eve worth
frosty snowy weather. In windows of all the houses flashing colored
lights . Celebrating and having fun .Apparently, due to the fact that
the New Year a general holiday , celebrate it so fun!

years' time.Follow these steps.

Нужно написать про Education...

Dialogue vocabulary :

In a hundred years' time there will ...

The most dramatic change will take place in..

First of all, it's necessary to mention ..

Then..

Finally..

We are convinced that..will..

We think... might become..

...is / are likely to become...

To sum it up , I'd like to say that..

Use:

advanced technologies .....computer classes...

inventive..reliable..challenging..developing..

(do) recearch.. alter.. become crucial..maintain....run out..

in response to..

нужно написать эссе 100 слов.помогите пожалуйста..

Kim came with friends to buy a car. Vince's father mr Scott decided to help Kim with car. He checked cars.
Guys looked cars. Then Vince and terry began to argue. Vince think that cars damage environment and people have to cope without cars. But terry doesn't agree with Vince . He think that people can't lives without cars nowadays . Kim was agree with Vince.
Then Kim asked boys to go out of town on Sunday. But Vince couldn't because he promised go out with Andrew . Kim and terry desired to go out by Terry's car.