ребят кто в английском шарит? исправте пожалуйста ошибки :[

On ... Sunday our family went to ... country.
We got up at ... sunrise and quickly had ... breakfast. After ... breakfast we
left ... home. There is ... lit­tle village not far from ... St. Petersburg
where we have ... friends. We went thereby ... train.
We had ,.. very good time in ... country. ... weather was fine. ... sky was
blue and ... sun was shining. We stayed out of ... doors all ... day long. We
played ... volley-ball and ... tennis. We returned to ... town late in ...
evening. When we came ... home, we had ... supper and went to ... bed at once.

1.Не заметить наш уход (Didnt notice our leaving) - верно?
2.Мы играли в археологов ( We played as if we were aechaeologis)
3. Искали меня по всему городу (имеется в виду: кто-то потерялся и его искали) ( Looked for me around the town)
4. Я пошла домой (Например, гуляла во дворе и пошла домой) НО! Живу в квартире, как лучше сказать (I went to my house или I went to my flat) Или как-то по-другому?

девятую часть мировой суши. Президент нашей страны Путин Владимир Владимирович. Столицей нашей родины город Москва. Вторая столица Санкт- Петербург. Санкт-Петербург является одним из самых красивых городов планеты. Население нашей страны составляет 143 200 000 человек. Наша страна занимает первое место по территории. Флаг России состоит из 3 цветов : белого, синего и красного. На гербе изображен двуглавый орел. В 1917 году Россия была провозглашена независимой республикой. Русские писатели известны по всему миру. Россия считается одной из самых снежных стран.

1. When we gather at a birthday Susie raw always sing along.
2. Incredibly beautiful rooms circus shows Dusollier.
3. The verse that we asked for literature seemed easy catchy.
4. His actions were predictable.
5. Kevin is a slave addict games
6. His decision was unfair.
7. In our city built a new large trough mall.
8. The boy was playing in the sandbox blare

9. I do not take it or leave it for your opinion
10. I admit my mistake

суди о книге по обложке >- любая из 3-х тем.

Cherepovets
Russia

25 December 2014

Dear Harry,
Thank you for letter. I am glad that. you are fine! I wish you success in study at Hogwarts.
In our school there are no doors that wouldn't unless you asked politely, or tickled them in exactly the right place. In my school doesn't have 142 staircases that led somewhere different on a Friday and staircases with a vinishing step halfway up. In our school, unlike Hogwarts no such subjects as the History of magic and Transfiguration. Also at our school there are not teachers ghost.
In the school we have many subjects, but ma favorite is Maths, becouse i like count, decide tasks, and figure drawing. Maths is divided into two sections on the geometry and algebra. On the lessons of algebra we decide different tasks and count examples. On the lessons of geometry we draw a line segments and prove Theorem.
Well i had better go now as i have to help Mum.
I am looking forward to your answer

Love,
Marina

Пожалуйста помогите исправить ошибки в тексте,
заранее большое спасибо тем, кому это несложно)

In modern society, most teens consider themselves independent while living with their parents. The issue of freedom of teenagers relevant because they want to grow up quickly and become self-reliant and free. Personally , I believe that we have a lot of freedom . First, most teenagers early start working , which makes them nezavisymimy and therefore free. Second, many of us do not listen to the advice of parents, relatives, teachers. This makes irresponsible teenagers , but free of any obligations. There are other opinions . Many parents believe that teens do not get too much freedom and they are trying to protect their children from the outside world , evil people . Unfortunately this can lead to the fact that in the future will not be adapted teenager to life. Still, my opinion is correct. I stand by my argument because the future depends on the youth , and we must be fully prepared and adapted to life , to the problems disrespect to envy. In conclusion I want to say that parents should pay attention to their children, to give advice and help to adjust to real life.