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Dear sir or madam, i want to express an admiration your wonderful hotel. I came to your city for a first time and i was surprised your beauty and greatness of your buildings. When I got into the hotel, I felt a warm and comfortable atmosphere. At reception post to me friendly served, porter has told history his city, about architectural monuments, places of interest and the date of base this hotel.
My room i very liked too. It was a good tidy, bright and beautifully decorated place. I excellent had a rest in your place, but routine duties made me urgently to returne to home. I was late(ing, незнаю как. имеется в виду я опаздывал) for the plane and when entered in cabin I realized that i have forgotten my small bag at hotel. In this bag were important paper necessary me for work.
Please, promt me how i can to returne my bag? I need to go to you or you can somehow to deliver it?

white hands, of which she was rather vain. Fifteen- year-old Jo was very tall, thin, and brown, and reminded one of a colt, for she never seemed to know what to do with her long limbs, which were very much in her way. She had a decided mouth, a comical nose, and sharp, gray eyes, which appeared to see everything, and were by turns fierce, funny, or thoughtful. Her long, thick hair was her one beauty, but it was usually bundled into a net, to be out of her way. Round shoulders had Jo, big hands and feet, a flyaway look to her clothes, and the uncomfortable appearance of a girl who was rapidly shooting up into a woman and didn't like it. Elizabeth, or Beth, as everyone called her, was a rosy, smooth- haired, bright-eyed girl of thirteen, with a shy manner, a timid voice, and a peaceful expression which was seldom disturbed. Her father called her 'Little Miss Tranquility', and the name suited her excellently, for she seemed to live in a happy world of her own, only venturing out to meet the few whom she trusted and loved. Amy, though the youngest, was a most important person, in her own opinion at least. A regular snow maiden, with blue eyes, and yellow hair curling on her shoulders, pale and slender, and always carrying herself like a young lady mindful of her manners. What the characters of the four sisters were we will leave to be found out. The clock struck six and, having swept up the hearth, Beth put a pair of slippers down to warm. Somehow the sight of the old shoes had a good effect upon the girls, for Mother was coming, and everyone brightened to welcome her. Meg stopped lecturing, and lighted the lamp, Amy got out of the easy chair without being asked, and Jo forgot how tired she was as she sat up to hold the slippers nearer to the blaze. "They are quite worn out. Marmee must have a new pair." "I thought I'd get her some with my dollar," said Beth. "No, I shall!" cried Amy. "I'm the oldest," began Meg, but Jo cut in with a decided, "I'm the man of the family now Papa is away, and I shall provide the slippers, for he told me to take special care of Mother while he was gone." "I'll tell you what we'll do," said Beth, "let's each get her something for Christmas, and not get anything for ourselves."

It is easy to be young? Ambiguous question . Who - will say that the younger easily. Before it opened all the way. It easily goes his own way , without thinking about what will happen tomorrow . With this statement we can agree . But there are many "buts" that say the opposite.
open before us many opportunities, but little time to catch everything . While you are young you are energetic and active. Therefore, during this period I want to try many things .

Young people have a choice to become someone down the road and everyone the way you want to be by someone you have to get an education. And to study takes a lot of time and effort .
but in the rest of the youth is the most carefree and cheerful life in the period . When you're young you're capable of anything .
So , it's hard to be young and it's fun and easy?
I think that's the most wonderful time of life,
but their complexity present in this wonderful time.
And without these difficulties youth was not interested and did not disclose
all the mysteries of the world.

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In modern society, most teens consider themselves independent while living with their parents. The issue of freedom of teenagers relevant because they want to grow up quickly and become self-reliant and free. Personally , I believe that we have a lot of freedom . First, most teenagers early start working , which makes them nezavisymimy and therefore free. Second, many of us do not listen to the advice of parents, relatives, teachers. This makes irresponsible teenagers , but free of any obligations. There are other opinions . Many parents believe that teens do not get too much freedom and they are trying to protect their children from the outside world , evil people . Unfortunately this can lead to the fact that in the future will not be adapted teenager to life. Still, my opinion is correct. I stand by my argument because the future depends on the youth , and we must be fully prepared and adapted to life , to the problems disrespect to envy. In conclusion I want to say that parents should pay attention to their children, to give advice and help to adjust to real life.